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Post by MESSENGER on Aug 12, 2014 5:04:24 GMT
[attr="class","profn"]writing contest [attr="class","profb"] We haven't had a writing contest in a while so, we're doing one. Same as always, entries must center around a character currently on Ambrosia - they can be alternate universe or not. There's no set word minimum or maximum, just be mindful of how much people will be willing to read. Entries must use one of the following prompts. You can write for as many as you like, but only one entry will be counted. #1. "I’ll give you one more chance to back out." #2. "I never could have imagined this." "Going on a date with me?" "24 flavors of soft serve." #3. "Nothing like dying poolside." #4. "I’m getting sick of that word." Prizes to be announced, but as usual there will be first, second and third; and they'll be good, don't worry. Winners will be decided by vote and participants will each recieve 5 nectar. Contest ends Wednesday, August 20th at Midnight.Extended to August 29th at Midnight!Post your entries below, and make sure to include the prompt.
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I yearn to see the world but the only world I know is anger and fear. |
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Post by ARDEN SILVAIR on Aug 19, 2014 19:19:30 GMT
arden at seventeen ”I’m getting sick of that word.”
Arden’s voice was sharp as she stared at the blank wall before her - pretending the man was not invading her personal privacy or stepping on her last nerve. Her gaze was intense enough to maybe start a fire or two but as her gaze looked downward at the doctor, the larger man somehow remained unburned. Oh how she wished she could obliterate his very existence just by breathing on his sad excuse of a life. She wanted to world to know who she was – all this doctor knew about her was that her heart was interesting and weak. She wanted to show him that she could truly be strong but as he had the stethoscope pressed to her chest the man once again tested her patience as his low voice mumbled out yet another ”Interesting”. Apparently the man didn’t care that Arden didn’t have a positive inclination for that word, as he seemed to be testing her patience. Maybe the doctor had a death wish? The though of killing this man passed through her head - not worth the time in prison.
She would be eighteen soon enough, then she would not be forced by her parents to go to this hellhole far too often. She could live her life without monthly checkups with old fat men telling her she was interesting. Arden wasn’t sure if they actually knew what was wrong with her but that being said she had made it abundantly clear that she was not interested in knowing a fancy medical term for something that rarely interrupted her life. She wanted to tell every person with a fancy degree to go fuck themselves and Arden would then skip out of the doctor’s office with the largest smile he could muster.
”With all do respect, our appointment is over so if you could kindly pry your repugnant hands off of my torso that would be lovely.”
Arden motioned with her head to the hanging clock upon the wall. The hour long appointment was finally over and she was free. She would never set foot into a doctors office ever again. The doctor knew it, her parents did as well – the best part was no one could force her to come. She was truly free. She hopped down from the examination table with a new found sense of happiness. She still wanted to burn the man to a living crisp but it would not stop her from enjoying this moment. The man opened his mouth to advise her about something but she couldn’t care less. Instead she held up her index finger. An over dramatized curtsey later she simply left. She was free. She would contemplate his death later. Currently she was free of the burden of being told she was weak. She would deal with the stupidity of not going to the doctors later. At the present moment she was healthy and free.
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❝ sometimes you gotta fall before you fly ❞ |
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Post by ARALYNN SHERIDAN on Aug 19, 2014 20:32:57 GMT
She couldn’t remember exactly how it started, but she accepted the challenge of a drinking game between one of Elliott’s customers. Whoever lost had to cover the tab. The game was seven, eleven, or doubles. An easy game to play and get pretty wasted on. Both of them had more than several drinks go down into their systems. The greenette could feel her cheeks already flushing from the intoxication settling into her system. A competitive smirk graced upon her lips as she stared at her competition. “I’ll give you one more chance to back out.”
“Fagedda bout et, Green Fairy. I’ma to win gonna.”
He's so drunk, he couldn't words.
Little did he know that Aralynn’s alcohol tolerance was actually pretty high. She used to party hard in her teenage years building it up to what it was now. It was how she knew how to play several other drinking games in the process. But she wasn't going to tell him that. Or the fact that she was cheating too. Sleight of hands was a trick her ex used on her when they played these types of games. It was how he always won or came out on top.
Was it wrong? Yes, it most certainly was. Just because somebody did it to her in the past didn’t mean she had to do it in the present. But to be fair, he was just a stranger whom she wasn’t going to see ever again. It was better to take advantage over him than let another man walk all over her again.
Her drinking opponent finally called it quits after his last shot tipping over the barstool and falling on the floor passed out drunk. A content smile graced upon her lips but quickly dissipated the moment she saw Elliott’s face. He saw right through her playfulness and the look of disapproval was obvious.
“You cheater. You knew you were going to win the whole time.” He went over to grab his cell phone to call a cab for the passed out customer. Guy had to wake up eventually to pay the bill. “He was asking for it the moment he came up to me. I couldn’t run the risk of getting taken advantage of, Ellie~”
“That’s a pretty weak excuse, grass-head. You know I wouldn’t let anyone hurt you in my pub. You don’t trust people that well, do you?”
No, she didn’t. Her brows knitted forming a slight ‘v’ shape at the news. Her high of victory was suddenly replaced with discontentment. “Way to kill a buzz, bartender,” she said with a sad smile, “Never knew you were such a good guy.”
And skilled at making her feel guilty. “Give me the bill. I’ll cover it.” Two wrongs don’t make a right. Never knew there would be a day when somebody would call her out on it. Looks like she had more to learn as well~
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crawl so low with some gin-soaked boy that you don't know |
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Post by IGGIE VAN ALLAN on Aug 20, 2014 19:21:26 GMT
i wrote this at like 3 am on my phone it's very experimental self-indulgent iggie death idek what is this here's some mood music
nothing like dying poolside. it’s perfect to die with the day, the blood red sunset glow behind his eyelids. the day’s heat slipping beneath the horizon, a hand dangling over the water, fingertips wet, shriveled and stinking of chlorine. the end of the day seems to slow, his heartbeat takes up the same sluggish rhythm.
it’s the silence (plastered over, forgotten, since the first and last time his mother hit him), it’s the urge to hit back after all this time, even as her hands hang limp and her lip trembles. that was hours ago, he wants to open his eyes to the empty yard. his mother is inside, wringing her hands and asking if this is her fault.
it’s knowing that he should feel bad but he doesn’t. he smokes too much and breaks everything, a junkie and a freeloader, unambitious, ungrateful; but she can forgive all that. she can’t keep a secret, his father is going to kill him. outed on impulse, iggie doesn’t know why he said it, doesn’t know what it was choking him into silence as he watched the smile slide from her face. she’s not so young and pretty as she used to be, everything changes (him, just him).
it’s regret, it’s guilt, it’s wanting to reach out and explain himself and set things right for once in his life and it’s knowing he can try but he won’t unwind this knot. he can’t talk himself out of this.
it’s spite, it’s wanting to step close and look down and tell her every depraved thing, every wrong thing how good it was to sin, the sheen of filth on his skin.
it’s just standing and staring, wide eyes and clenched fists. his father was right did she coddle him too much oh god why oh ignatius how could this happen how could you be like this what will they say ignatius you can’t
but none of that is why he’s laying fully dressed on the pool deck, a handful of downers pressed like cool hands to his forehead heavy hands holding him still smooth palms and light fingers soothing his nerves, a chemical lullaby. none of that is why he’s going to die he’s stupid, there’s no intent. he doesn’t care.
he’s pretty sure he’ll die if he falls asleep and he’s definitely going to fall asleep. a vague thought, unaffected as the thought he should call dmitri. let him know god knows he would be the only one to care.
iggie can’t feel the ground beneath him, his hands are numb it’s the feeling of being outside himself laying on the ground he can’t feel the ground nothing no one is there god knows it’s dead silent turned out like this only he’d care call him just him nothing like dying poolside in the dark
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it feels like the perfect night for breakfast at midnight |
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Post by DEXTER DOE on Aug 25, 2014 2:03:51 GMT
promp: "I’m getting sick of that word." notes: idk i told laika i'd enter, n i'm delivering.
"dexter are you serious? you can't leave the island, you're just a kid!" "you can't runaway like that again! you'll worry your mother." "ms. doe, i'll be frank. you can't get into that school, you're grades simply aren't up to par."
at seventeen, dexter is a ball of reckless and impulse with a hate of the word "can't". everyone tells her what she can't do, no one tells her what she can do. so she takes it as the things she can't do are the things she should do.
she runs away more times than she cares to count. her parents yell at her until the black skies turn blue and her eyes go from wide to droopy. she gets off the island a couple of times, smells the ocean breeze and sees the clear water below the boat. she's brought back every single time, and lectured until she swears the other person's face turns blue. she applies to every school that her teachers tells her not too and - unsurprisingly - doesn't get into any of them. her blue eyes turn gray from the boredom of having to listen to more lectures from more boring mouths.
after she graduates, she goes straight to work. she saves up some money for a while doing odd jobs and filling in for friends when they can't turn up for work. eventually, she figures she has enough.
she packs a backpack full of random things and her stuffed animal and leaves the house without saying goodbye to her parents. she's eighteen when she leaves, her parents don't lecture her when she comes back. she pays for a ticket for the next boat off the island and smiles to herself as she waves bye to the driver of the boat and places two feet on new, solid ground. no lecture from them either. she does some interning while she's away, it's not schooling, but it gives her some experience and her bosses like her quite a bit. she doesn't get a lecture from them either.
at twenty-one, dexter hasn't been lectured in quite a while, and she swears the next time someone tells her she can't do something, she'll punch them in the fucking face.
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bitchez, dey come dey go |
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Post by YUN MO on Aug 29, 2014 4:23:25 GMT
LIONEL RHODES"i'll give you one more chance to back out. i'm not a pushover, kid. doesn't matter how good you are. you give me shit once, and you're kissing the fish." the ugly american bit into his cigar, his teeth the color of his spit. the other one nodded. lionel would remain a delicacy around this one. he didn't like the smell. in a lithe motion, he tossed the client a plastic grocery bag filled with pebbles of diamonds. his mask smiled. he held out his hand to shake. "it matters precisely how good i am." the man was about to shake but pulled his hand away. "excuse me?" "if i were to back out, i assure you that i will evade the consequences you are alluding to." "don't test me, thief." lionel shrugged, removing his hand from the darkness between them. "i'm the best you can find," his voice lowered. "your talent isn't my main concern." "i'm just stating the obvious, relax." the gruesome man twisted his face. "you've got some nerve." the plastic bag was thrown back. "don't hold your breath for any of my business. you're not the only spider in this town." lionel twisted the plastic back in his fingers as he watched his client turn his back and climb into a black car parked just outside the alleyway. she could have him, then.
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Post by CREATION on Aug 30, 2014 1:21:42 GMT
prompt #2
Bjorn didn’t know how he managed to get so lucky. Phoenix was older than him by a year and they hadn’t had any classes together. However, meeting her was the best thing to ever happen to him. She was smart, beautiful and made him feel important. He stepped off his downward spiral for her, to be enveloped in the cloud of happiness.
Now they were on their first date together, hand holding and getting ice cream. “I never could have imagined this.”
Bjorn looked up from his vanilla chocolate twist. “Going on a date with me?”
“24 flavors of soft serve.”
They both burst out into laughter.
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Post by KRISTOFFER KROWE on Aug 30, 2014 4:29:23 GMT
Swirls of reds, blues, yellows. They all twisted and coiled together to form purples, oranges, and greens.
Whites dipped into clear to collect those swirls and coils, dyed to stain and replace. Smiles blended with them, laughter joining not long after when someone slipped. Wrong placement, sponge skirting across the tile.
Hours passed and the sun baked those colors, pulled the clear out and returned it to the atmosphere, only to have it come back tomorrow. But nobody knew that, not yet.
When everyone left, text flowed from fingers. "Nothing like dying poolside."
Yeah, though a bit of red stained his ivory hair.
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Post by MESSENGER on Aug 30, 2014 4:35:54 GMT
[attr="class","profn"]closed [attr="class","profb"] Voting will be open until September the 3rd.
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